Who wants to read my UChicago extended essay?! :D

<p>Since I only have a couple of hours to submit it in, would anyone be willing to give my extended essay a quick read? It's about the two types of people. It's about 564 words.
Also, if you're familiar with the song "Circus" by Britney Spears it would probably help you understand a few references in it. But if not, that's okay too. At this point, any critique would be fine.
Thanks and I appreciate it! (:</p>

<p>pm it to me if you want</p>