<p>I am not very confident about this, any one care to take a look and offer some opinions?</p>
<p>not applying to bu. pm me</p>
<p>you can send it over to me if you'd like.</p>
<p>i applied to bu by dec1 so if u want feedback from someone who went through the process and actually has an idea of what specific things you're talking about, send it to me. i'd be glad to give u feedback.</p>
<p>hi, either pm it to me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>(but do it soon, i have vacation plans in 4 days)</p>
<p>Hey, if you want someone else to look at it, I'll do it. I'm doing some transfer apps this year (but not to BU, so don't worry), and I'd like to see what others are doing for their "why" essays.</p>