"Why Chicago" Critique

<p>Looking for a few people to critique my "Why Chicago" essay, preferably not '14ers. </p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’m a '14 but I was already accepted to Chicago EA.</p>

<p>I’m a '14er, but I’ve already been accepted ED. I’d love to help if you’re up to it.</p>

<p>'13er you can pm it to me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you want me to; '14er accepted EA.</p>