"WHY?" Essay Critique

College Essays
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<p>Hello, </p>

<p>I'm wondering if anyone would like to take a look a my Why Chicago? Essay...??? Any feedback would be great! I wasn't sure which path to go- creative of formal... and I'm still not, but right now it's definately formal, but I have time to change it and don't know if I should spice it up a bit.</p>

<p>Thanks,
123321</p>

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<p>i’ll read it
pm me</p>

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<p>Anyone else? I REALLY need help!</p>

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<p>ill read it, got into Duke ED and wrote a Why Duke essay</p>

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<p>I’ll read it…not applying to U Chicago, Northwestern’s the school for me…</p>