<p>Hey Guys,</p>
<p>Can someone give me some feedback on my common app essay? It is still in one of its first drafts and I would appreciate any grammar/content/style help. I plan on using it for EA and ED on Nov. 1 for UChicago and Duke and would like to get it done in the next week or so.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>Bumpsies</p>
<p>I’ve already submitted it to one school and need feedback before applying to my top choices.</p>
<p>Send it along if you want some feedback!</p>
<p>@kp2241 If you still need help you can always send it over!</p>
<p>I can definitely help 
I got into Duke last year!</p>
<p>Thanks guys…</p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>
<p>I’m also applying to Chicago, but I promise I won’t steal any material. It’s a horrible idea anyways. If you trust me, send away.</p>
<p>Bump</p>
<p>You can send it my way</p>
<p>Sorry. I’m not sending to current high schoolers.</p>