Why NYU Essay

So I’m starting my transfer application and was wondering if anyone could read my Why NYU essay?

The most important thing in writing why NYU essay is to show why NYU? Not NYC.
As you are a transfer, you may want to say things based on your experiences. You may discuss things about specific programs at NYU or specific professors that attract you. It will also be nice if you provide a brief study plan at NYU - the plan that hopefully only NYU can provide.