"Why Wellesley" too vague?

<p>In summary: my parents love it, but one of my friends thinks that it doesn't sound like I'm making Wellesley stand out. Would any current/former Wellesley students or ED acceptees be willing to read it and tell me what their feelings regarding it are? I would be very thankful, especially because it's due today... so, yeah...</p>

<p>What do you mean it’s due today? isn’t it due 1/15?</p>

<p>I applied Early Evaluation, and the deadline for that was January 1.</p>