Will anyone be reading to read my supplemental essays for UVA?

For UVA, I’m instructed to do two essays. Will anyone be alright with me PM’ing my two essays to make suggestions, revisions, etc? I’m open to suggestions so all help is wanted.

The two prompts I’m doing are:

  1. We are looking for passionate students to join our diverse community of scholars, researchers, and artists. Answer this question, which corresponds to the school/program you selected above, in a half page or roughly 250 words.

College of Arts and Sciences - What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way?

  1. Required of ALL applicants, regardless of school or program. Answer one of the following questions in a half page or roughly 250 words (Please select the prompt you are responding to):

What is your favorite word and why?

Sure! You can pm me if you want!

Be careful sending your essay to strangers. Do you have any friends or teachers you can ask to review your essay for you?

Agree with the above. IMO it is always best to ask an English teacher you trust to read your essays over. If you do send your essay to anyone on CC be sure it is an adult with a long posting history.