Will anyone take a look at my writing supplement?

Colleges and Universities A-Z New York University
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I’d really appreciate it if someone looked over my writing and told me how it looks.

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I can help

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Hi! Thank you. I’m sorry I hadn’t responded sooner! It’s been quite a while now, so it’s ok. I didn’t have access to my account, forgot the password.

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I’ll take a look at it! Just shoot me a message!

Could you also chance me?

http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/new-york-university/1738933-chance-me-with-other-strange-factors.html#latest

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Hi, I actually haven’t saved it remotely or on the computer that I’m using at the moment, so it’s ok, but thank you! Also, you seem to be very qualified for admission, good luck!