will somebody read my essay? (not typical - English major)

<p>So, I ran into a dilemma last week when I realized that my favorite supplement essay was about two times too long. I decided to try and adapt it to use for the Common App, so I did, and I want some feedback.</p>

<p>It's a little different, but I'm going to be an English major so I wasn't really trying to write something that everyone else would.</p>

<p>PM me if you want to read.</p>