<p>Ok, so is this essay as cliche as I think it is? I'm actaully kind of embarrased to give it to people I know. If you guys would be so kind as to make some suggestions I would be forever grateful.</p>
<p>i'll read.</p>
<p>pm me if youd like!</p>
<p>Anyone else? I have two - one for common app and one for my supplement. Gotta finish both tonight!</p>