will someone look at my UC Prompt 1?

College Essays
1

<p>Can someone proofread it for me? thanks.</p>

2

<p>I don't know you, but I'd be happy to read your essay.
I'm kinda new to this, but just PM me.
:)</p>

3

<p>I can proofread</p>

4

<p>ill read it</p>