would anybody be willing to critique my...

College Essays
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<p>..Stanford and Cornell essays?</p>

<p>I have had no help on these and i dont really know anybody who can critique them (my english teacher already is doing it for many people and i dont want to swamp her more). i am not to happy about either one (especially stanford due to the word limit) and i wrote about 4 for stanford and am trying to pick the best one (I will only send the one i think is best). i will PM somebody the essays. thanx in advance</p>

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<p>You can PM me if you want. Include the prompt as well, as that helps in deciding if you are answering the prompt or not.</p>

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<p>me .</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll look at either…</p>