<p>If you are willing to do so, it would be greatly appreciated. Just comment below and I'll PM you (or alternatively you could just PM me directly).</p>
<p>I'm not necessarily looking for grammatical correction, as this is a fledgling rough draft I still have months to perfect. I just want to know if the aim of the essay is good or if I need to trash it altogether.</p>
<p>I'm highly insensitive, so if you're a brutal critic, I would definitely love to hear your thoughts.</p>