Would anyone be willing to read my NYU essays??

<p>Hi!
I'm applying regular decision to CAS at NYU. I was hoping to send my essays off tonight and would like someone to read them. I wrote them rather.....untraditionally.... (i.e. not in a very narrative style) because:
a) It's not really my style
b) I have very specific interests and didn't have enough room to put them into a story.
c) I feel the AdCons may appreciate the direct approach if it's done well. </p>

<p>Would anyone be willing to read/edit them and give me their feedback? If so, I'll PM them to you!</p>