Would anyone be willing to read my Statement of purpose for transferring into UT Austin CS?

<p>Hey guys so I'm trying to transfer into UT Austin from out of state and I was wondering if anyone could read my statement of purpose and tell me how it is:</p>

<p>Heres the link
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O-snOR41W-XIcn1_JUflVaUKItb1_-MiIGcqLjBKlTM/edit?usp=sharing"&gt;https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O-snOR41W-XIcn1_JUflVaUKItb1_-MiIGcqLjBKlTM/edit?usp=sharing&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>