Would anyone be willing

<p>to read a college application essay I wrote this weekend in a spontaneous burst of self-discipline (and rip it apart mercilessly)?!</p>

<p>I think it's a moderately unique essay idea, and I'd definitely love a ton of feedback!
Thanks so much :)</p>

<p>sure.
10 char</p>

<p>thanks--i'm PMing it to you. :)</p>

<p>anyone else, by any chance?</p>

<p>I'm bored, why not? Last act of random kindness before it's off to bed ;)</p>

<p>i'll look at it too :)</p>