Would anyone like to edit my UC#1?

College Essays
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<p>I've been having a ton of trouble trying to think of what to write about for this prompt so I finally decided to just start WRITING, and, after a bit of editing, here's what came up. I would appreciate if someone could look over this and see if it's headed in the right direction. (it's not completely done yet)</p>

<p>Preferably '08ers, if possible...</p>

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<p>I'll look over it for you, PM me.</p>

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<p>I'm an 08er as well. PM me and I'll take a look if you want</p>

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<p>thanks, anyone else?</p>

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<p>get your english teacher to do it, or friends who know you
I'm certain your English teacher won't reject reviewing your essay, unless s/he is a pompous ass.</p>

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<p>Il read it</p>

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<p>yaya .</p>

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<p>I'll read. PM</p>

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<p>I can read it. PM?</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>i'm an 08er (:
and i did my #1 too! wanan trade? PM me!</p>

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<p>I'll try to help. PM me.</p>

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<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>