Would anyone like to read my essay?!?

<p>Hey, I'm just looking for some input on my essay. It's a personal narrative of a very impactful moment. I've edited it time and time again, but getting other people's opinions always seems to help. I'm attempting to make it flow a little better and locate any grammatical errors. Let me know if you are interested and I can PM it to you. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Sure, I'll take a look at it.</p>