Would anyone like to review/read my appeal letter?

I’m currently writing an appeal letter to UCSB and would love some revisions. Due to the COVID-19 outbreak, my school is closed and I am unable to directly consult with my teachers/counselors. I’m not sure if I can directly message people on here. If anyone would like to revise/has any suggestions please let me know!

Note: I don’t want to post my letter publically in case someone tries to plagiarize it

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