Would REALLY appreciate your opinion on my "What Matters To You" essay

<p>I've had a hard time answering this one, and I'm still not really feeling good about my draft. Please, let me know if you'd be willing to read it and give me some honest criticism.
(I'm aware that I have about 2 days left, so this is pretty urgent for me)
Thank you in advance!</p>

<p>sure I will read it…</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>Thanks, I visitor messaged you.</p>

<p>I’ll also take a look at it.</p>

<p>I visitor messaged you too, tryp13.</p>

<p>did you recieve my critique of it?</p>

<p>Yes I replied in a visitor message. Thank you!</p>

<p>I’m a good writer. You can PM me it and I’ll give you a good and speedy response.</p>

<p>Stevie, I guess I can’t PM because I haven’t made 15 posts yet, but I’ll “visitor message” you. I’m new to this site.</p>

<p>Stevie-
your last 30 posts have said the exact same thing about editing people’s essay with a “good and speedy” response. I doubt you are actually in the charity of critiquing essays so what’s up?</p>

<p>I’m concerned about the security of other people’s essays because you are asking for full copies of essays for Ivy League applications…</p>

<p>Please explain… :/</p>

<p>Thanks for looking out for me, Tara. I’m going to give him the benefit of the doubt and assume he just uses a similar response every time, but I haven’t gotten a speedy response yet either…</p>