Would someone PLEASEEE read my personal statement!!??!

Hi y’all

It would be really helpful if someone currently in college would read my common app essay thus far. Not really for grammar, more for the major takeaways of my essay. Any help would be GREATLY appreciated!!

I am not a current college student, but I will offer a brief critique if you PM your essay to me as I have some free time now.

@Publisher are you applying to college this year?

No. I am an adult poster.

P.S. I am signing off now. I will check back in a day or two.