Would someone read my Cornell Supplement Essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Cornell University
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<p>This year's prompt is:
College of Engineering: Tell us about an engineering idea you have, or about your interest in engineering. Describe how your ideas and interests may be realized by—and linked to—specific resources within the College of Engineering. Finally, explain what a Cornell Engineering education will enable you to accomplish.</p>

<p>I can pm my essay, thank you :)</p>

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<p>send it over!</p>

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<p>ill gladly read it :)</p>

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<p>Feel free to send it to me :)</p>

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<p>DO NOT SEND YOUR ESSAY TO ANYONE ON THIS SITE!!! Common sense should tell you that it could be stolen. Go to your English teacher, your college counselor, a parent - ANYONE BUT PEOPLE HERE WHO ARE IN THE SAME BOAT AS YOU!!!</p>

<p>You are too trusting…</p>

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<p>^Agreed.
Even if we give people here reading your supplement the benefit of the doubt, it would still be unwise. Most people here are applying to college themselves and would not give the constructive criticism you need from an older person such as your English teacher or guidance counselor who have experience with college applications. Start with people close to you first.</p>

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<p>I can critique on grammar. Pm me!!</p>

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<p>Feel free to sent it to me. I email is Matthewchen2266@**********</p>

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<p>I don’t know why CC blocks my Gmail account.</p>

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<p>Send it over, I can critique</p>

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<p>i can critique on grammar/content too send it if you’d like!</p>

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<p>Don’t show your essay to anyone on CC, there are infinitely many people who can help you with these. Your English teacher, a peer critic, college counselor, and maybe… your parents too.
@cicit123 you can’t put an email on CC, It automatically blocks the domain name for privacy but you spilled it already so…</p>