<p>i wrote this about 3 weeks ago but the more I look at it, the more critical I am. anyone wanna read and help me out? thanks.</p>
<p>PM it to me if you want, but I'm an '09er</p>
<p>I can read it/ give u a critique</p>
<p>hi. pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>
<p>i'm an 08, pm me if you want me to offer suggestions</p>