Would you mind reading my essay?

<p>I've only written a rough draft for my essay for UF. If anyone would like to read my essay, please PM me and I'll send it to you for your thoughts. Thanks so much...it's a huge help. I'm having a problem with the second part of the prompt that asks how my experience "will affect my college experience/contribution to the community"</p>

<p>The essay prompt I have to write about is:
Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your family, your school or community activities, or your involvement in areas outside of school.</p>

<p>Nevermind...I decided to write a completely different essay in reaction to a spurt of writing creativity! :)</p>

<p>Sure. Whether or not it's this or some other. Feel free. =]</p>