Writing about a philosopher who impacted you?

College Essays
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<p>Here's the prompt (it's for USC):</p>

<p>"Newton’s First Law of Motion states that an object in motion tends to stay in motion in the same direction unless acted upon by an external force. Tell us about an external influence (a person, an event, etc.) that affected you and how it caused you to change direction."</p>

<p>The past few years, I've spent a lot of time reading philosophy, and a particular man has made the most impact on me. Is it ok to write this essay about him and what I've learned from him?</p>

<p>The only real concern I have is that his ideas are contrary to common beliefs of today; such as Christianity. </p>

<p>I guess I'm worried I'll say "X's idea of Y made me realize that I needed to make the most of life, because as far as we know, there is no afterlife."</p>

<p>...and thoughts like these might not go over real well with a super religious adcom.</p>

<p>Thoughts?</p>

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<p>Bump. Any thoughts?</p>

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<p>Who is this, Nietsche? lol go with it, no one will care, I consider myself something of an agnostic and my beliefs shine through my application plus if anything you add a new perspective to their environment, assuming that that environment is mostly Christian.
Good luck</p>

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<p>i've actually considered the same topic. i don't think you should hold back if you really think you can write an honest, personal, and revealing essay about what this philosopher has taught you. make sure to focus on yourself throughout the essay, rather than on the philosopher. and as you write bit by bit, consider the possibilities of seriously offending someone that holds different beliefs. do not question any other beliefs.</p>