<p>In his new book, Quest for Adventure, the <a href="A">u</a> renowned British mountaineer Chris</p>
<p>Bonington examinesthe <a href="B">u</a> past century's most </p>
<p>remarkable expeditions, <a href="C">u</a> profiling such explorers <a href="D">u</a> including</p>
<p> Neil Armstrong,Thor Heyerdahl, and Maurice Herzog. </p>
<p>(E) No error</p>
<p>I put (E) No Error. Why is it (D) including ? O___O</p>
<p>Idiom; I think it should be “such … as,” rather than “such … including.”</p>
<p>The error is D because you always put “as” after such if you want to present examples! You can’t say “such…including”, you have to say “such… as”.</p>
<p>^yes, it is somewhat rendundant because they are both introductory (like to a list) words.</p>
<p>right. you can use “such…as”, or you can use “including” (after a comma). But you can’t use “such” and “including” together.</p>