<p>Most major air pollutants cannot be seen, although large amounts (of them) (concentrated in) cities (are visible) (as) smog. (No error)</p>
<p>The answer is E.</p>
<p>I choose "are visible" as the error because I thought the sentence needed another "as" to complete the "as... as" construction.</p>
<p>Most major air pollutants cannot be seen, although large amounts of them concentrated in cities are AS visible AS smog. </p>
<p>When would the "as...as..." construction be necessary...? And when would it not? Because in this case it wasn't...</p>