Writing Question

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<p>Mediators were standing by, prepared to intervene in the labor dispute even though both sides had refused earlier offers for assistance.</p>

<p>What is wrong? Why? And how do I correct it?</p>

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<p>It should be:</p>

<p>“Mediators were standing by, prepared to intervene in the labor dispute even though both sides had refused earlier offers to assist.”</p>

<p>One makes a request for assistance and a offer to assist.</p>

3

<p>Actually, it’s “…offers of assistance.” </p>

<p>But i guess silverturtle’s version works if nothing in the sentence was underlined to correct for errors.</p>

4

<p>Yeah, “offers of assistance” is also an acceptable substitute.</p>

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<p>next time when u post writing question underline the problems as it does in the writins ection so we can distinguish easier bud.</p>