<p>[Because their flight was missed, the bride's parents ran] frantically to another part of the airport.</p>
<p>[Because the pride's parents missed their flight, they had to run] frantically...</p>
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<li> Why is the 2nd correct? I thought the first was more concise.<br></li>
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<p>In the novel, Jane Eyre must make many difficult choices, [like when she forces] herself to leave the house of Mr. Rochester, the married man she loves.</p>
<p>In the novel, Jane Eyre must make many difficult choices, [as exemplified by when she forces] herself to leave the house of Mr. Rochester, the married man she loves.</p>
<p>In the novel, Jane Eyre must make many difficult choices, [including forcing] herself to leave the house of Mr. Rochester, the married man she loves.</p>
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<li>Why is the 3rd correct?</li>
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<p>that's all for now..</p>
<p>First one:</p>
<p>Active>passive, always, unless the choice which contains the active voice is grammatically incorrect.</p>
<p>Second one:
Choice one is unidiomatic (correct me if I’m wrong), “like smth smth” is more of a verbal language instead of written</p>
<p>choice two is too wordy.</p>
<p>First one: You have to maintain either an active voice or a passive voice consistently.</p>
<p>Second one: This isn’t an idiomatic issue (in reference to the above poster). It’s parallelism. “…like when she forces…” is a verb phrase and isn’t parallel to “choices,” which is a noun. Thus, one should have a noun, “…including forcing…” This may seem like a verb phrase, but is actually a noun because it precludes an action, her forcing of herself to do so on.</p>
<p>Another way of thinking about the 2nd question is like this:</p>
<p>The sentence mentions that Jane makes may difficult choices, which is the name of a giant group (if you will) of choices). “Including forcing” (the correct answer) introduces one of the examples from the giant group of difficult choices that Jane makes.</p>
<p>for the first one, could it also be [Because the pride’s parents missed their flight, they ran] frantically… instead of ‘had to run’?</p>
<p>^That’s probably OK as well.</p>