<p>Hello Yalies</p>
<p>I need your help, I am a transfer student hoping to get some insights on what Yale admission officers are looking for in the essays. I have prepared two essays and in the process of editing them with my English professors. I will need any current or past students(less than 5 years) to read my paper and give me feedback. I need someone who is going to be brutally honest, as this piece will be the most important piece of the whole application. Please PM me if you are interested in helping me out, thanks!</p>
<p>To give you a better picture of where I stand, here are some information about my stats.</p>
<p>College GPA: 3.9
Credits received: 56
Honors/Awards: Phi Theta Kappa International Honor Society, Deans list or Presidential Scholars every semester, Who's Who award
Work Experiences/Volunteer: Investment broker at major institution-Current, IRS Certified Volunteer tax preparer.</p>