Yale Supplemental Essay - Readers needed : )

<p>Please let me know if you will read my Yale supplemental essay. </p>

<p>I want to know if its good or I should just scrap the whole thing and pick a new topic. The deadline is approaching and I'm definitely nervous. </p>

<p>Send it over (parent here) but be forewarned that I’m a stickler when it comes to grammar.</p>