<p>Synopsis: It is about my mom overcoming cancer and how it has affected me. I mean a woman who is able to keep a smile on to protect her child's ignorance while she is in pain is the epitome of excellence. :P</p>
<p>I'm '09, but I already wrote my common app essay (which is what I'm assuming this is for?) and am very good at editing. If you're comfortable with that, I am more than happy to read.</p>
<p>sent, anyone else want to critique it?</p>
<p>bumpa lump</p>
<p>I'll read!</p>
<p>Three of my friends are all writing their essays about cancer/disease. I've read their essays and you should be careful not to make it sound cliche or too much like a sob story. I'd love to edit yours!</p>
<p>it sounds like a great essay, even from your description itself.</p>
<p>bumpalump~</p>
<p>looking for experienced readers >.<</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>
<p>i'll read it :]</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>