A really, really risky essay for UPenn - Would anyone mind taking a look?

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<p>i wannna see! i applied ED, mine was pretty out there too</p>

<p>Thanks for the kind offers guys, but, as I've already sent it in, any more feedback would only cause unnecessay anxiety :) </p>

<p>If you're just curious, though, feel free to drop me a line (Raven <em>at</em> ultraSW.com) and I'll be happy to share... (I won't remember to check this thread, heh :))</p>