<p>I just finished editing my 'why do you want to go to upenn?' essay and want some feedback on it. Thanks a lot.</p>
<p>I'l take a look.</p>
<p>i will gladly look</p>
<p>I'll read it as well.</p>
<p>ill take a look</p>
<p>ill take a look also, if you need the imput</p>
<p>pm! pm! i can help too!</p>
<p>If you still need assistance, pm me. I lived in philly all my life so I'm really familiar with Penn.</p>
<p>PM it to me and I'll help.</p>
<p>Sure, I'll give it a look. PM me.</p>
<p>Ive read quite a few of those. Ill read it and tell you what Ive written in it myself and what should be written it. PM it to me. Ill edit it too only if possible :)</p>
<p>I would like to read it. PM me!</p>
<p>i can read it also (i will critique and send it back to you)
i know A LOT about Penn</p>
<p>Im interested in reading it.</p>
<p>Hi there!</p>
<p>I currently work in my university's admission department. Although I don't have a say in the admission decision, I know how they operate and could give you an honest opinion if your essay works or not. I wouldn't mind reading it and proofing it either. Please email it to <a href="mailto:marc.d.tan@gmail.com">marc.d.tan@gmail.com</a>. I look forward to reading your essay!</p>
<p>i'll critique it</p>
<p>Sounds Interesting! I would like to help!</p>
<p>me too me too</p>
<p>pm me. ill read it</p>
<p>I'll take a look. (and I dont have like 2 posts :))</p>