A Risky, Complex Essay. Care to Read?

College Essays
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<p>Tell me what you think and whether the transitions and content is clear.</p>

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<p>Sure - pm it to me.</p>

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<p>I'll talk a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll take a look and offer feedback. PM me!</p>

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<p>you can pm me.</p>

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<p>pm it to me and i will give some feedback</p>

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<p>I'll take a gander, lulz.</p>

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<p>ill take a look.</p>

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<p>Send it over!!</p>

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<p>I'll give you some feedback if you'd like!</p>

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<p>I PM'ed my thoughts to you. Very nicely done.</p>

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<p>email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>i'll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>Importantcollege, not too sure if I can give my essay to you. All your posts have been on the essays forum. Despite saying you are a Yale Graduate, I found a topic where you were asking about the commonapp....</p>