Activities Essay

<p>Anyone care to read my Common App. activities essay and provide feedback? I need to cut 31 words, and I'm also not sure if it's a good subject for my essay. I'm up to changing anything, including the subject.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>PM with prompt/title if applicable.</p>

<p>i’ll read it and cut it down!</p>

<p>Sure, I can help, PM me!</p>

<p>i’ll read! PM</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it. =3</p>