advice on my essay

Applying to College
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<p>I wrote my essay today and was wondering if anyone would be interested in giving me advice/feedback on it</p>

<p>I'll PM it to you if you are</p>

<p>thanks</p>

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<p>I'll take a look and give some feedback.</p>

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<p>ok ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll do a read</p>

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<p>send in 2 me</p>

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<p>If it's okie...and u haven't already received enough feedback...i would like to run through your essay...</p>