Feedback on my college essay?

Applying to College
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<p>So I'm the first going through college and it's a little tough to find good/trustable advice. However, if anyone here would be willing to read my short answer I'd greatly appreciate it!</p>

<p>I've written a draft and would like to hear some opinions on it.
I'll send a link to you privately so just let me know you're interested! </p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

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<p>Posted this late last night so just bumping it haha</p>

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<p>Hey! I’d be willing to read it for you! Just message me I guess, I’m kinda new to this whole forum thing.</p>