<p>Okay well first off I am not even sure what topic it fits under. I think it can be "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you." but if not I will just stick it under topic of choice. if you can proofread it for grammar and transition stuff, it would really help. :)
please comment if you can read it and I will PM you.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it for you. =]</p>
<p>I can do it too 
Gdluck!</p>
<p>sure i’ll read. pm it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it
PM it to me.
Ill try my best to edit it.</p>
<p>I’ll try even not that good at ~</p>
<p><a href=“mailto:zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu”>zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu</a></p>