I need a second opinion. I need any opinion.

<p>I wrote my Common Application essay a while ago. I chose the prompt "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you." I haven't gotten any opinions on it because I never got around to asking my English teacher for help before school let out, and showing it to my friends and sister would just be weird.</p>

<p>Anybody want to read it and let me know what they think? :D</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>I'll read it, pm it</p>

<p>i'll read it if you'd like</p>

<p>sure send it over</p>