<p>Well exactly, I tried to write in an almost fable like way without going into any true detail about you know “I changed because of this or that” it’s merely presenting the facts and letting them attempt to comprehend it. But thank you for the feedback, really I kind of want to know if I should cut any of it out or summarize any part of the details without really screwing it up. & I dont really care if people steal my life story, I would honestly probably feel honored unless they submitted it to the school I’m applying to before I do because that would be pretty crappy.</p>