Amherst Essay

<p>So I've gotten about 3/4's of the way through this essay and now im LOST!!! I really need some direction haha. Don't worry about hurting my feelings with your critique :P. I just want to make it as interesting and powerful as can be.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance guys!</p>

<p>Sure, PM it to me.</p>

<p>I’m also applying (the prompts are tough!), but I’ve got all my ideas down already.</p>