An emotionally intellectual essay?

<p>Are there people willing to read and tear apart my Brown essay? </p>

<p>Right now I'm using it for the supplement, but I could potentially switch it around as the main one.</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>thanks, pmed you. Anyone else?</p>

<p>I promise you can be as brutal as you want to!</p>

<p>i'd be glad to give it a read,,,,</p>

<p>tho i am an 09'er, so only if you're comfortable with it</p>

<p>i'd read it. email me @ <a href="mailto:iltistan@gmail.com">iltistan@gmail.com</a> or PM me</p>

<p>lol I don't mind. </p>

<p>disclaimer: I'm an 09er, but my essay's almost done. So only if you're comfortable.</p>

<p>Made some changes with ee33ee's comments, think it's slightly better now!</p>

<p>Looks like everyone's asking for essay opinions this time of year. Anyone else?</p>

<p>pm away mate</p>

<p>I'd like to read it~</p>

<p>ill read, pm me</p>

<p>I will read & critique your essay from a parent's viewpoint.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it. PM that sucker over.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>ill read it, if you dont mind an '09er!</p>

<p>heyy soph in college pm it over if u want - it may take me a couple of days to read it tho.</p>