An EXTREMELY nice college essay

College Essays
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<p>Well, after I edit it from your feedback.</p>

<p>I'm hoping to use this essay for MIT and the common app (for ivies and stuff), so please give your comments. It would be nice if you were a college student, but it is not required. I just require that no one steal this essay. </p>

<p>Please respond promptly (don't take weeks or more than like 5 days). I will send you my essay asap if I believe you are a candidate who will give honest feedback. </p>

<p>Before you say you want to read it, please list:</p>

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<li>Your Status (High school student, College Student, Parent, etc...)</li>
<li>If you're a college student, where you attend or attended college (so i can ask for advice)</li>
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<p>class of 09 here. Not applying to any ivies and or MIT though.</p>

<p>Id like to see it.</p>

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<p>lets see it. pm it over</p>

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<p>Class of 09 here as well...</p>

<p>I'd like to take a little peek as well. Thanks.</p>

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<p>09', I'd love to read and provide some helpful critiques on your essay. Just PM me</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it. I graduate in 2011 from Dartmouth....</p>

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<p>Bump 10 char</p>

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<p>you can pm it to me if you'd like, I would love to help.</p>

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<p>pm me for some really good, analytical editing. :)</p>

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<p>Sure, why not? I'm class of '09 as well and just recently finished writing my rough draft for my essays, so I guess we can say we're both on the same page. :) Just PM me.</p>

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<p>hello! I'd like to see it.
Can you please pm it to me ?</p>

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<p>lol send me a copy. I'd like to know what the essay from outstanding student is like</p>

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<p>Class of '09(sunny hills)
i'll be glad to take a look and tell you what i think about it</p>

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<p>Class of 09, applying to Ivies, but my essays are done.</p>

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<p>Class of '10, applying to Ivies, I also started writing my future college essays so I know stuff. ;D</p>

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<p>I'll edit. Have not, will not, am not, did not apply to MIT :)</p>

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<p>Parent of '09 applicant.Not applying to MIT. Would love to help. PM me your essay</p>

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<p>Class of '09</p>

<p>I've already finished my essays (rough) so no worries. I always edit my friend's essays for grammatical errors if that helps.</p>

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<p>dude i will love to read it. i am a sophmore in college already so no worries</p>

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<p>'09er and interested. Send me a copy as well. (:</p>