<p>Ok here the deal. I was on a serious roll when I was typing my paper. But in one section I began to repeat words at the beginning of some sentences because it fit well into the overall idea of the essay. Is this ideal? If so, should I not use for example: "One person... .One person..." and replace it with "One person... ,one person..." or "One person... ; one person..." </p>
<p>I think this part is the very life of my essay and I don't want to really eliminate it but rather improve it.</p>