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<p>Prompt: Are all important discoveries the result of focusing on one subject?</p>
<p>Discoveries are profound foundings that may impact people in tremendous ways. Though professions nowdays require one to hone in on one subject are, in the fourteenth-century renaissance, polymaths prevailed. Focusing one's attention on multiple areas give way for incredible discoveries. St. Augustine and Mendel are such polymaths who have impacted societies years after with their epiphanies. </p>
<p>In "Confessions of St. Augustine", Augustine recounts his life journey starting from the time he was a boy. He reaches adulthood and begins focusing on rhetoric eventually becoming a teacher in that area. However, his main story is not one of discoveries in rhetoric. He shares his enlightenment of his spiritual life. Augustine, born many years before the 14th century, was a renaissance man. He was a rhetorician, a teacher, a philosopher, and a religious man. Augustine shares his spiritual discover that he found as he had diverted himself in many areas. His profession and many interests led him to his religious epiphany that people read of to this day. </p>
<p>If Augustine is influential in the religious world, Mendel is a discoverer impacting our world of science today. Mendel, too, did not find his knowledge that he is known for through his profession although it enabled him by providing the environment. Mendel is called the father of genetics. He was a monk who lived in a monastery. He had devoted his entire life to remain in solitude for God. Mendel grew pea plants and soon became fascinated by their process of reproduction and the outcomes. He observed them for many years and started the study of genetics. He surely was not a scientist, but his religious fervor provided an environment that enabled him to find major discoveries still hugely impacting the world today. </p>
<p>many people believe that only one's intense focus on a subject can lead to findings important enough to be shared. Augustine and Mendel both exemplify that just by being a passionate person, one can lead to major discoveries. A passionate heart will pave the road for discoveries even without professional knowledge.</p>