another "who wants to read my essay?" thread

College Essays
1

<p>I've shown it to my English teacher and my parents, and they gave me conflicting advice, so I'm desperate for a third opinion. don't be afraid to rip it apart.</p>

<p>any takers?</p>

2

<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine. : )</p>

3

<p>ill read it :)</p>

4

<p>I d like to read it. PM me!</p>

5

<p>ill read it!!! pm it to me</p>

6

<p>bump</p>

<p>OK I redid it a bunch, it’s almost 200 words shorter now. anyone else want to read it before I submit it?</p>

7

<p>I can do it if you don’t mind reading mine?</p>