<p>Hey guys, so I finished my common app essay, and I'd really like some opinions other than that of my English teacher. To anyone who takes the time to read it, thank you!!</p>
<p>Shoot it over!</p>
<p>…what school btw?</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind reading over it!</p>
<p>I’m not the best critic… but I can proofread all right :P</p>
<p>thanks guys! anyone else?</p>
<p>I’ll give it a look-over. :3 Not sure how much advice I can provide–I’m a total amateur at this–but eh.</p>
<p>i would love to give it a shot</p>
<p>thanks, everyone!
anyone else?</p>