any advice on essay?

<p>I am starting my college essay for next year in my AP english class, and need some advice on what to include and what to omit. Dealing with my mothers alcoholism, and overcoming my own OCD have helped shape me into the man I am today. I would like to write about these topics but do not want to submit a "Sob" story. Please help me determine if adding these events is a good move or not.</p>

<p>thanks in advance</p>

<p>please help i have to email my teacher my outline by midnight!</p>

<p>If I were you I would keep a detached tone in the essay. You don’t want to sound sappy. Be truthful and unique and your essay will shine. Also be specific, choose a particular instance in your life where these two factors were obstacles and then explain exactly how you overcame them. Good luck.</p>